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Valorfall
09-23-2012, 02:09
So I just wanted to tell you guys that I have started writing a book. I would love it you guys read it and gave me you opinions (just try not to be too big of a dick about it) lol..

http://www.wattpad.com/story/2192249-blind-blood


Thanks guys I really do appreciate it.

KaNtSt0PMeH
09-23-2012, 02:59
Pretty good so far Watson, I would suggest talking to River and Iron the most as they are avid statesmen in the art of the quill! lol

Specops03SS
09-25-2012, 16:08
I would love to read the finished product. Mollie and I love to write stories together too. She is not easy to please with books, and she is really interested in your story.Actually she kinda flipped out when that was all she got to read....way to get her hooked. Seriously...I want the finished copy to read. She is already upset with me for making her read it and not being able to finish.

Rickety Rob
09-26-2012, 05:56
Nice Fallen. When do you expect the book to be finished?

River_Rat_459
09-26-2012, 07:17
Very good my man!

iamthesgt
09-26-2012, 08:44
Interesting premise. Definitely needs to be edited - a lot of the dialogue is choppy. But the foundation is there for sure.

ladym123
09-29-2012, 19:39
Aw Valor that's not fair...leaving us with a cliffhanger like that lol! :drama:

Why does he die?!!