Not to nitpick, but the clan description on the front page has some grammatical issues. You might want to look at it if you get a moment. First impressions are everything.
The description says:It should read this way:Are you a civilian, we don't judge, you'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly or employ real battlefield tactics; we're probably not the clan for you, but if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere, whiles't digging the dirt with some old salts, and hearing the way the military used to be, look no further...
"Are you a civilian? We don't judge! You'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly, or employ real battlefield tactics, we're probably not the clan for you. But, if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere whilst digging the dirt with some old salts and hearing about the way the military used to be, look no further."
Sorry...it's just the grammar nerd in me coming out. :geek:
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07-20-2010, 19:20 #1USMG Beer & Boob Judge
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Front page grammatical errors
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07-20-2010, 19:24 #2USMG Prestiged Member
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Re: Front page grammatical errors
Ooh...get you River ...you little hawk eye!
Originally Posted by River_Rat_459
Not to nitpick, but the clan description on the front page has some grammatical issues. You might want to look at it if you get a moment. First impressions are everything.
The description says:It should read this way:Are you a civilian, we don't judge, you'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly or employ real battlefield tactics; we're probably not the clan for you, but if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere, whiles't digging the dirt with some old salts, and hearing the way the military used to be, look no further...
"Are you a civilian? We don't judge! You'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly, or employ real battlefield tactics, we're probably not the clan for you. But, if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere whilst digging the dirt with some old salts and hearing about the way the military used to be, look no further."
Sorry...it's just the grammar nerd in me coming out. :geek:
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07-20-2010, 19:34 #3USMG Beer & Boob Judge
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Re: Front page grammatical errors
It's habit, Lady. Lots of reading for entertainment as a kid....at least until MTV came along when I was a teenager. Originally Posted by ladym123
Ooh...get you River ...you little hawk eye!
It was all downhill after that!
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07-20-2010, 21:45 #4USMG Prestiged Member
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Re: Front page grammatical errors
yep...money is for nothing and the chicks for free Originally Posted by River_Rat_459
It's habit, Lady. Lots of reading for entertainment as a kid....at least until MTV came along when I was a teenager. Originally Posted by ladym123
Ooh...get you River ...you little hawk eye! It was all downhill after that!
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07-23-2010, 07:27 #5I run this website..
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Re: Front page grammatical errors
fixed.
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07-23-2010, 20:29 #6USMG Beer & Boob Judge
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Re: Front page grammatical errors
Ummm, you did? Might want to check again. Maybe your update didn't stick. Originally Posted by smoke
fixed.
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