River_Rat_459
07-20-2010, 18:20
Not to nitpick, but the clan description on the front page has some grammatical issues. You might want to look at it if you get a moment. First impressions are everything. :)
The description says:
Are you a civilian, we don't judge, you'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly or employ real battlefield tactics; we're probably not the clan for you, but if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere, whiles't digging the dirt with some old salts, and hearing the way the military used to be, look no further...
It should read this way:
"Are you a civilian? We don't judge! You'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly, or employ real battlefield tactics, we're probably not the clan for you. But, if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere whilst digging the dirt with some old salts and hearing about the way the military used to be, look no further."
Sorry...it's just the grammar nerd in me coming out. :geek:
The description says:
Are you a civilian, we don't judge, you'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly or employ real battlefield tactics; we're probably not the clan for you, but if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere, whiles't digging the dirt with some old salts, and hearing the way the military used to be, look no further...
It should read this way:
"Are you a civilian? We don't judge! You'll fit right in here with our casual civilian group too! If you like to bark orders, practice constantly, or employ real battlefield tactics, we're probably not the clan for you. But, if you enjoy a casual gaming atmosphere whilst digging the dirt with some old salts and hearing about the way the military used to be, look no further."
Sorry...it's just the grammar nerd in me coming out. :geek: